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million of people move to english speaking countries in order to get better education

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nowadays, tons of individuals move each year move to english speaking countries in order to attain better education. this statement show positive trend. this eassy elaborate the positive impact to pursue further study in foreign countryin the begining, there are some ubiquitouse reasons why this is beneficial to pursue their study in other nation first of all, people believe that they learn english rapindly in other countries as they will get chance to speak with native on daily basis which enhance the english. even which improve the understanding with other furthermore, those scholar completed their graduation in the other nation like canada they will get more opportunity of job with handsome sallary. even they will easily get their desiresble job also because they will have good college qualificationmoreover, learner who pursue their further study in another countries. they can deposit their college fees themselve because student easily get part time job in other countries so they will easily paid their expense as well school fees. for example, a organisation survey that 70% student pursue their further study in abroad due to lots of amenities even which make better understanding in conclusion, there is no doubt english language became a second popular language in the world so which is very crucial for children for their future jobs in multinatonal company
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IELTS essay million of people move to english speaking countries in order to get better education

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  American English
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218 words
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