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What is your favourite subject?

What is your favourite subject? 300JJ
In today’s world, you need to have a job to earn your living to live an ordered life. Therefore, after finishing high school, you must think carefully to decide the subject you want to focus on. Eventually, you might think about the most important subject. Well, as far as all of you know, Maths is used not only in studying but also in everyday life; maybe there will be different jobs but all of them shared the same factor: Maths. It is just a matter of using it frequently or sometimes. For instance, being a seller - which is the easiest job to do, also needs to do calculations. If the customer gives you too much money, you will have to give her back the change, so that’s one situation. Sometimes, I even thought that if the sellers calculate so quickly, why don’t they be an accountant? That would be a much better job: sitting in a cosy room, no waking up early! But I get the answer is because it is their daily skills but they can’t be an accountant because they don’t have enough knowledge and understanding about the subject. Maths also can be used to change the world, too. For example, the covid-19 epidemic is spreading fast and has killed millions of people all around the world. Some countries even got the pandemic so badly that there isn’t even enough place for the dead people, just like India. So what is Maths doing in this situation? Well, scientists are using it to calculate and measure chemicals to create the vaccine. Several countries in the world have got the vaccine and people are getting vaccinated, just the adults from 18 up. They are planning on creating a vaccine for children. So now, can you see the importance of Maths? Without Maths, the world will turn upside down. But that doesn’t mean you have to get into the Maths faculty. You can pursue your dream job and help the world. In conclusion, Maths is very important, especially to this ever-changing world. Maths helps people to reach the goal of their dream jobs. Many students hate studying Maths because it is difficult. So a saying for students like that is “Hating learning Maths is hating helping THE WORLD! ! ”.
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today
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, you need to have a
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job
to earn your living to
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live
an ordered life.
Therefore
, after finishing high school, you
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must
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think
carefully
to decide the subject you want to focus on.
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think
about the most
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important
subject.

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used
not
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only
in studying
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but
also
in everyday life; maybe there will be
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different
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jobs
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but
all of them shared the same factor:
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Maths
. It is
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just
a matter of using it
frequently
or
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sometimes
.
For instance
, being a seller
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which is the easiest
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job
to do,
also
needs to do calculations. If the customer gives you too much money, you will
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have to
give her back the
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change
,
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that’s one situation.
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, I even
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thought
that if the sellers calculate
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so
quickly
, why don’t they be an accountant? That would be a much better
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job
: sitting in a
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cosy
room, no waking up early!
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But
I
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get
the answer is
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because
it is their daily
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skills
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but
they can’t be an accountant
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because
they don’t have
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enough
knowledge and understanding about the subject.
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also
can be
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used
to
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change
the
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, too.
For example
, the
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covid-19
epidemic is spreading
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fast
and has killed millions of
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people
all around the
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world
.
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Some
countries even
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got
the pandemic
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so
badly
that there isn’t even
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enough
place for the dead
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people
,
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like India.
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So
what is
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doing in this situation? Well, scientists are using it to calculate and measure chemicals to create the vaccine. Several countries in the
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world
have
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got
the vaccine and
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people
are getting vaccinated,
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just
the adults from 18 up. They are planning on creating a vaccine for children.
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So
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now
, can you
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see
the importance of
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? Without
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, the
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world
will turn upside down.
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that doesn’t mean you
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have to
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get
into the
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faculty. You can pursue your dream
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job
and
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help
the world.

In conclusion
,
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very
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,
especially
to this ever-changing
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world
.
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Maths
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helps
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people
to reach the goal of their dream
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jobs
.
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Many
students hate studying
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because
it is difficult.
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a saying for students like
that is
“Hating learning
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is hating
helping THE
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WORLD
! ! ”.
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IELTS essay What is your favourite subject?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
380 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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