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I have been using “Write and Improve” for several weeks now to practise and improve my English writing. Firstly, you can choose the level of your English from beginner to advance and more, also, it has a lot of various topics to write about it, such as jobs reports, e-mails to friends and even more. Secondly, it is a really good tool to see your mistakes when you write and how to improve then, you can check it all the times you need, and it will tell you what words are incorrect and what phrases you can do better. Furthermore, it tells you what level you have after finishing every text. To conclude, I think “Write and Improve” it is one of the greatest tools I ever tried to learn English in contrast with others that didn't help me this much. Undoubtedly I am going to recommend this page to all my friends, so they can also can start to learn and improve like I am doing.
I have been using
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“Write
and
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for several weeks
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to
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practise
and
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my English writing.

Firstly
, you can choose the level of your English from beginner to advance and more,
also
, it has
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a lot of
various topics to
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write
about it, such as jobs reports, e-mails to friends and even more.

Secondly
, it is a
really
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good
tool to
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see
your mistakes when you
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write
and how to
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improve
then, you can
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check
it all the times you need, and it will
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tell
you what words are incorrect and what phrases you can do better.
Furthermore
, it
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tells
you what level you have after finishing every text.

To conclude
, I
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think
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“Write
and
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Improve”
it is one of the greatest tools I ever tried to learn English
in contrast
with others that didn't
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help
me this much.
Undoubtedly
I am going to recommend this page to all my friends,
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so
they can
also
can
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start
to learn and
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improve
like I am doing.
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IELTS essay n using “Write and Improve” for several weeks now to practise and imp

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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