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What are the advantages and disadvantages of students migration

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Nowadays students in whole over the world, tend to migrate for studying in other countries. For example, in Iran, about 1000students migrate to other countries annually. According to the report, the most common reason that students migrate is an economical problem. The other reasons are climate, natural calamities, cost of universities, social and political problems. By the way, distinguished students have more opportunities to study abroad. by studying in other countries students can learn other languages, getting familiar with other cultures and met new friends and lots of other benefits. The worst harm is being away from family and feeling homeless.
Nowadays
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students
in whole over the world, tend to migrate for studying in
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other
countries.
For example
, in Iran, about
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1000students
migrate to
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other
countries
annually
. According to the report, the most common reason that
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students
migrate is an economical problem. The
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other
reasons are climate, natural calamities, cost of universities, social and political problems. By the way, distinguished
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students
have more opportunities to study abroad.
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by
studying in
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other
countries
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students
can learn
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other
languages, getting familiar with
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other
cultures and met new friends and lots of
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other
benefits. The worst harm is being away from family and feeling homeless.
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IELTS essay What are the advantages and disadvantages of students migration

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