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What is your favorite winter activitie

What is your favorite winter activitie NyGRN
What is your favorite winter sport? Well mine is skiing. I started skiing when i was 7. I ski down hills that are 17 km. Sometimes i get too much snow on my face, and wherever i am I have to stop clear the snow, and then go otherwise I could fall or get injured. My dad does snowboarding so that he can watch over me while i go down the hill. It is also very supportive on the first hill of the season as i am always very scared. The size of my skies is non- negligible. My goal next year is to go down my first hill spontaneously (if they even open due to the pandemic).
What is your favorite winter sport? Well mine is skiing. I
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was 7. I ski down
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hills
that are 17 km.
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Sometimes
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get
too much snow on my face, and wherever
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am I
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have to
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stop
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clear
the snow, and then go
otherwise
I could fall or
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get
injured. My dad does snowboarding
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so
that he can
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watch
over me while
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i
go down the
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hill
. It is
also
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very
supportive on the
first
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hill
of the season as
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i
am always
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very
scared. The size of my skies is non- negligible. My goal
next
year is to go down my
first
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hill
spontaneously
(if they even open due to the pandemic).
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IELTS essay What is your favorite winter activitie

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
118 words
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