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the study pressure of causes and effects

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Nowadays, the study pressure of students has always been a topic of concern. Due to the accumulation of too many examinations, the academic pressure of students is increasing. In addition, too much stress may increase the level of mental depression. Too many exams are one of the reasons for more and more stress on students. Students not only worry about the examination results, but also need to spend a lot of time thinking about the difficulty of the examination. Text anxiety statistics show that 30 percent of students are negatively affected by exam stress, according to the Anxiety and Depression Association of America. Under the pressure of many exams, studying ability and efficiency are not high. This means it can further increase stress. Thus, examinations are a stress for every student.
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IELTS essay the study pressure of causes and effects

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