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what is your favorite restaurant ?where is it ?what type of food does it serve?how often do you go there?why is it your favorite?

what is your favorite restaurant? where is it? what type of food does it serve? how often do you go there? why is it your favorite? kjb6K
The name of my favourite restaurant is Candi and it’s situated in the centre place of the city I am currently living in. The restaurant offers Chinese, Italian, Indian, Thai, Pakistani and local menus that give you a wide range of options to pick from. I go there once a week with my friends or family. . Not only I like the spacious, serene environment, tasty menus that the restaurant serves, but I have lots of memories related to this restaurant.
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offers Chinese, Italian, Indian, Thai, Pakistani and local menus that give you a wide range of options to pick from. I go there once a week with my friends or family.
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IELTS essay what is your favorite restaurant? where is it? what type of food does it serve? how often do you go there? why is it your favorite?

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1 paragraphs
81 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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