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What is the solution to learn a new language

What is the solution to learn a new language EqypQ
Ways to improve the learning foreign languages. It is commonly known that foreign languages is vital to work, travel, study and etc. Foreign languages become more and more important in our life. So every person should know at least 1 foreign language to find well paid job. And very popular question: how to improve learning of foreign language. Listening problems The great way to improve is listen every day minimum 2 hours foreign language speech, for instance English, songs, podcasts. Second is watching movie in original language with subtitles. It helps those whose skills in speaking or vocabulary are low or even less. The best way is to listen to and sing songs in those kinds of music we like. Low vocabulary Another way to broaden our skills read newspaper or magazines, books, post of your favorite bloggers. And also learn more word with synonyms so your vocabulary will be more extended. So you can use it in a right way. The next way is create free courses for kindergarten, and speaking clubs for adult, for this government will help and develop the knowledge of their citizens. Also government can increase specialized school of foreign language. Taking everything into account, I've presented ways to improve the learning of foreign languages. But obviously those ways are the best ones.
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can increase specialized school of
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IELTS essay What is the solution to learn a new language

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
218 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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