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People aged above fifty should retire and they should be be replaced by youngsters. Do you agree or disagree ?

People aged above fifty should retire and they should be be replaced by youngsters. xxL0N

The future is depending on youngsters. They are the backbone of every nation. The age above should be considered as relaxation period of life. Thus, the society can get rid of the unemployment issues faced by youth to an extent. And also the utilisation of their energy in various aspects along with their updated knowledge is possible. Youngsters should be the replacement of aged people's, it can overcome the lack

The future The verb 'depending' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
is depending
 on youngsters. They are the backbone of every nation. The age above should be considered
 as relaxation period of life. Thus
, the society can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of the unemployment issues faced by youth to an extent. And also
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utilisation
 of their energy in various aspects along with their updated knowledge is possible. Youngsters should be the replacement of aged This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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