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Everyone could turn into a vegetarian diet. To what extent do you agree of disagree with the statement.

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Nowadays, the competition of eating healthy food is reaching its peak for the reason that people are becoming more cautious regarding their diet. On the other hand, eating the important nutrients that we get from eating chicken, meat or beef cannot be ignored either. Consequently, this essay agrees with the given statement because of the more nutritional values that the vegetables contain. To begin with, the significant amount of calories and carbohydrates are achievable from a personalized diet plan. Moreover, if you are eating polutrymore than you are expected, you are likely to suffer from various diseases such as, heart stroke, obesity, cholesterol, joint weakness and pain. The amount of nitrogen that meat contains is extremely harmful for your body. In the second place, in developed countries, the ratio of people who follows the strict diet is way more than the people in developing countries. The cultivation procedure of vegetables is developing day by day. Thus, the amount of nutrients does not decrease. On the other hand, the places whre the animals are kept are not fully supervised and the food that is given to them is not healthy as well as not cleaned properly. For instance, if you are eating healthy vegetables, you feel more fresh and active. On the contrary, if you are eating poltury, you are more likely to feel dull and sleepy. To sum up, in my opinion, government should impose a number of rules and regulations to increase work ethics. Additionally, it should also increase the awareness in general public regarding the importance of eating fresh vegetables.
Nowadays, the competition of
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eating
healthy food is reaching its peak for the reason that
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people
are becoming more cautious regarding their diet.
On the other hand
,
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eating
the
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important
nutrients that we
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get
from
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eating
chicken, meat or beef cannot be
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ignored
either.
Consequently
, this essay
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agrees
with the
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given
statement
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because
of the more nutritional values that the
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vegetables
contain. To
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begin
with, the significant amount of calories and carbohydrates are achievable from a personalized diet plan.
Moreover
, if you are
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eating
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polutrymore
than you are
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expected
, you are likely to suffer from various diseases such as, heart stroke, obesity, cholesterol, joint weakness and pain. The amount of nitrogen that meat contains is
extremely
harmful for your body. In the second place, in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developed countries
, the ratio of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who follows the strict diet is way more than the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
developing countries
. The cultivation procedure of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vegetables
is developing day by day.
Thus
, the amount of nutrients does not decrease.
On the other hand
, the places
Possible spelling mistake found.
whre
the animals are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
are not
fully
supervised and the food
that is
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given
to them is not healthy
as well
as not cleaned
properly
.
For instance
, if you are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
healthy
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vegetables
, you feel more fresh and active.
On the contrary
, if you are
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eating
Possible spelling mistake found.
poltury
, you are more likely to feel dull and sleepy. To sum up, in my opinion,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should impose a number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
and regulations to increase work ethics.
Additionally
, it should
also
increase the awareness in
Consider using "public".
general public
regarding the importance of
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eating
fresh
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vegetables
.
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IELTS essay Everyone could turn into a vegetarian diet.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
262 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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