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We all dream of looking great, being young and healthy for many years. But at the same time, we often lead the wrong lifestyle and postpone health care for "Monday". As a result, overweight is diagnosed in more than half of the population in developed countries. The danger of obesity is that it is not only a problem of appearance, but also a profound systemic change in the balance in the body. Excess weight affects all organs and systems, causes serious illness and shortens life expectancy by years, if not decades. Obesity is one of the key factors in the occurrence of cardiovascular and endocrine diseases, diseases of the musculoskeletal system. There are studies that indicate the relationship between excess weight and cancer. Over the years of observing the problem of excess weight, doctors around the world have come to the conclusion: the most effective way to reduce it is a healthy diet in combination with physical activity. In the fight against the hated kilograms, our main ally is not a friend, not a colleague at work, not authors of books on nutrition, and not even a doctor in a white coat, but ourselves. Only self-discipline, perseverance and self-improvement will help you change your lifestyle and maintain positive results for a long time. In the treatment of obesity, our goal is not to reduce the number on the scales, but to normalize metabolic processes. In other words, with excess weight, the body works like a broken mechanism, and the goal is to “fix” it. We’ve heard that being overweight is hereditary and there is nothing you can do about it. This excuse is an excuse for those unwilling to put in the effort and self-control. In fact, genetic factors matter much less than lifestyle and dietary habits. Eating well when ove rweight is not a diet. On the contrary, doctors recommend eating well and not enduring agonizing hunger. Food should be taken 5-6 times a day, while watching not how much we eat, but what we eat. Our first step should be putting together a healthy menu. If you are obese, you should not go on the first diet you come across or count the calories in every dish obsessively. Instead, let’s take a closer look at healthy foods and gradually introduce them into the diet, replacing them with junk food and fast food. We should go to sport and spend more time on the move. Proper nutrition will only work when combined with physical activity. In addition, exercises will help keep the body in good shape, and after losing weight we will not look like a deflated ball. For losing weight most effectively, you need to contact a specialist gastroenterologist. He will develop a special menu for us, teach us to understand the variety of products, direct us to the necessary research and help identify those weaknesses in our health or lifestyle, which are pushing us into a vicious circle of weight gain Overweight is a problem that should be dealt with from the very early signs of its appearance, in order not to bring the matter to a visit to the doctor. Meanwhile, regular medical examination will not be superfluous and will help to identify in the early stages all the signs that in the future may lead to excess weight and related problems.
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and postpone health care for
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is diagnosed
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more
than half of the population in
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developed countries
. The
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danger
of obesity is that it is not
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only
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problem
of appearance,
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also
a profound systemic
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change
in the balance in the body. Excess
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weight


affects all organs and systems, causes serious illness and shortens life expectancy by years, if not

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decades
. Obesity is one of the key factors in the occurrence of cardiovascular and endocrine diseases,

diseases of the musculoskeletal system. There are studies that indicate the relationship between
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excess


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weight
and cancer.

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weight
, doctors around the world have
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come
to the

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conclusion
: the most effective way to
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reduce
it is a healthy diet in combination with physical activity. In

the fight against the hated kilograms, our main
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ally
is not a friend, not a colleague at work, not authors

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of
books on nutrition, and not even a doctor in a white coat,
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but
ourselves.
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self-discipline,

perseverance and self-improvement will
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help
you
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change
your
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lifestyle
and maintain
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positive
results for

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a
long time.

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reduce
the number on the scales,
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but
to normalize

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metabolic
processes.
In other words
, with excess
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weight
, the body works like a broken mechanism,
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and


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the
goal is to “
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fix
” it.

We’ve heard that being overweight is hereditary and there is nothing you can do about it. This excuse
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is


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an
excuse for those unwilling to put in the effort and self-control. In fact, genetic factors matter
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much


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less
than
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lifestyle
and dietary habits. Eating well when
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ove rweight
is not a diet.
On the contrary
,
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doctors


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recommend
eating well and not enduring agonizing hunger. Food should
be taken
5-6 times a day,
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while


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watching
not how much we eat,
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but
what we eat.

Our
first
step should be putting together a healthy menu. If you are obese, you should not go on the
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first


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diet
you
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come
across or count the calories in every dish
obsessively
.
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,
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’s take a closer look at

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healthy
foods and
gradually
introduce them into the diet, replacing them with junk food and
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fast
food.

We should go to sport and spend more time on the
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move
. Proper nutrition will
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only
work
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when


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combined
with physical activity.
In addition
, exercises will
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help
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keep
the body in
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good
shape, and
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after


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losing
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weight
we will not look like a deflated ball. For losing
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weight
most
effectively
, you need
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to


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contact
a specialist gastroenterologist. He will develop a special menu for us, teach us to understand
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the


variety of products, direct us to the necessary research and
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help
identify those weaknesses in our health

or
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lifestyle
, which are pushing us into a vicious circle of
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weight
gain

Overweight is a problem that should
be dealt
with from the
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very
early signs of its appearance, in order

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not
to bring the matter to a visit to the doctor. Meanwhile, regular medical examination will not be

superfluous and will
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help
to identify in the early stages all the signs that in the future may lead to excess

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weight
and related problems.
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IELTS essay obesity causes several problems. what are the solutions to this problem

Essay
  American English
33 paragraphs
556 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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