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More and more people nowadays suffer from obesity and health problems.what is the reason for this? What can be done to resolve this issue?

More and more people nowadays suffer from obesity and health problems. what is the reason for this? What can be done to resolve this issue? QKA2w
It is commonly said that many people are suffering from over weight and physical illness. This essay will discuss about the reason of this issue and give some remedies to recover from this problem. There are lots reasons for fatness and health issues. The first and most the reason is the over usage of junk foods. Modern foods are enriched with glucose and substances that will increase fat. For example, In the recent studies after the arrival of these kinds of foods shown that there is a marginal increase of heavy fat and health problems among humans. The junk are the most and important reason for the unhealthy problems. Proper exercise and good dieting are the two main solutions for reduce weight problems and for good health. To exemplify, there are lots of peoples testimony that the daily yoga and proper dieting are there secret of their health. Appropriate dieting and strict exercise are the two medicines of good health condition. There are lots of today suffering from physical health problems and grossly fat. This discussed about the detailed solutions for the problem and mentioned major reasons for overweight and bad health issues.
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are suffering from over weight and physical illness. This essay will
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discuss about the
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reason
of this issue and give
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some
remedies to recover from this problem.

There are lots
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reasons
for fatness and
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health
issues. The
first
and most the
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reason
is the over usage of junk foods. Modern foods
are enriched
with glucose and substances that will increase
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fat
.
For example
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fat
and
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health
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problems
among humans. The junk
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the most and
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reason
for the unhealthy problems.

Proper exercise and
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good
dieting are the two main solutions for
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reduce
weight
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good
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health
. To exemplify, there are lots of peoples testimony that the daily yoga and proper dieting are there secret of their
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health
. Appropriate dieting and strict exercise are the two medicines of
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good
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health
condition.

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today
suffering from physical
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health
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problems
and
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fat
. This
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discussed about the
detailed solutions for the
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reasons
for overweight and
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bad
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issues.
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IELTS essay More and more people nowadays suffer from obesity and health problems. what is the reason for this? What can be done to resolve this issue?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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