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A DRASTIC CHANGE CAN BE SEEN

A DRASTIC CHANGE CAN BE SEEN kLd5K

A drastic change can be seen in the way of commuting. Some of masses opine that car is the most proficient way of travelling in city, while believe in bicycle. I will articulate both the view points, give my opinion and deduce a logical conclusion in the subsequent paragraph. There are numerous reasons as why cars are the prominent way of travelling in cities but the most conspicuous point is convenience. Cars are comfortable, as they are not affected by the weather. One can travel easily from one place to another. Moreover, people can also carry things along with them as it considered lot of space. Apart from this, a person can also commute with his family as well as with his friends which is not available in the bicycle. Furthermore, cars are the safest mode of transporataion as there are less chances of injury due to their features. For instance, there are enormous features in the cars such as AVS brake, airbags and anti theft alarm making them shielded of travelling. However, considering the other views, bicycles are cost effective. Since, they do not consume petroleum, which may also help in protecting fossil fuels. Moreover bicycles are also cheap mode of transportation. Apart from this, they do not emit hazardious gases which put deterimental effect on our atmosphere. Furthermore, it also makes person fit and healthy and they can protect themselves from harmful diseases. Probing further, one do not stuck in the traffic congestion

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change
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seen
 in the way of commuting. After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ("Some of the masses") or simply say "Some masses".Some of the massesSome masses
Some of masses
 opine that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 is the most proficient way of travelling in city, while believe in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
. I will articulate both the view points, give my opinion and deduce a logical conclusion in the subsequent paragraph.

There are numerous reasons as why You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 are the prominent way of travelling in cities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the most conspicuous point is convenience. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
Cars
 are comfortable, as they are not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by the weather. One can travel easily
 from one place to another. Moreover
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can also
 carry things along with them as it considered lot of space. Apart from this, a person can also
 commute with his family as well
 as with his friends which is not available in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycle
. Furthermore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
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transporataion
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less
 chances of injury due to their features. For instance
, there are enormous features in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 such as AVS brake, airbags and anti theft alarm making them shielded of travelling.

However
, considering the other views, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycles
are cost
 effective. Since, they do not consume petroleum, which may also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in protecting fossil fuels. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbike
bicycles
 are also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 mode of transportation. Apart from this, they do not emit Possible spelling mistake found.hazardous
hazardious
 gases which put Possible spelling mistake found.detrimental
deterimental
 effect on our atmosphere. Furthermore
, it also
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makes
 person fit and Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).healthy, and
healthy and
 they can protect themselves from harmful diseases. Probing further
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