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What is the relevance of the teachers job?

What is the relevance of the teachers job? RyPWp
"The teachers job is as a guide to understanding many topics, they help us to have a particular point of view to learn better because they have the experience and knowledge. Especially, when we want to learn English or another language ever we need a person to teach or maybe correct us or explain to us. because the language is very extensive and has many particular estructures. for example, when we are chields and we do not know to speak, our mothers or parents help us to understand the words, sentences, phrases, their pronunciation, and specific expression or regionalism and we can communicate with other people understanding the structures, thats before is same a teacher explaining or teaching. Many people have the skills to learn by themself, and they have the ability to do many connections in their brains to understand better, but if someone wants to learn English very well it will be very difficult because it has many pieces of a puzzle and needs a guide to find the correct ""position"" of the piece, for example, the textbooks also are a guide but it does not have all answers to the specific question of students, and a teacher helps him to solve that doubt. In conclusion, I agree with the affirmation of when a student trying to learn English independently find it difficult because each language has special things for that reason is necessary that another person with the knowledge explain them to find a way to continue learning. "
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topics, they
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help
us to have a particular point of view to
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because
they have the experience and knowledge.

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English or another language ever we need a person to teach or maybe correct us or
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explain
to us.
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because
the language is
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extensive and has
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particular
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chields and
we do not know to speak, our mothers or parents
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help
us to understand the words, sentences, phrases, their pronunciation, and specific expression or
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regionalism and
we can communicate with other
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people
understanding the structures,
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is same a teacher explaining or teaching.

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connections in their brains to understand better,
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if someone wants to
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pieces of a puzzle and needs a guide to find the correct
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"position
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" of the piece,
for example
, the textbooks
also
are a guide
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it does not have all answers to the specific question of students, and a teacher
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helps
him to solve that doubt.

In conclusion
, I
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with the affirmation of when a student trying to
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learn
English
independently
find it difficult
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because
each language has special things for that reason is necessary that another person with the knowledge
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explain
them to find a way to continue learning.
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IELTS essay What is the relevance of the teachers job?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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