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Preferences for the opposite gender confuses me at the moment. Previously, I was attracted to East Asian races like Japanese and South Korean males. However, since I have been watching numerous English movies for a while. Somehow, I may be limiting myself to Asians. Therefore, I should widen it to the Caucasian race which is a possibility since I am planning to migrate to greener Pasteur.

Preferences for the opposite gender confuses me at the moment. Previously, I was attracted to East Asian races like Japanese and South Korean males. However, since I have been watching numerous English movies for a while. Somehow, I may be limiting myself to Asians. Therefore, I should widen it to the Caucasian race which is a possibility since I am planning to migrate to greener Pasteur. gDKrl
Preferences for the opposite gender confuses me at the moment. Previously, I was attracted to East Asian raaces like Japanese and South Korean males. However, since I have been watching numerous English movies for a while. Somehow, I may be limiting myself to Asians. Therefore, I should widen it to the Caucasian race which is a possibility since I am planning to migrate to greener Pasteur. It is started when I stumbled on the movie Painted veil on a paid cable where Edward Norton and Naomi Watts are the main actors in that movie. Surprisingly, I admired the character of Walter Fane who was played by Edward Norton: a British gentleman, shy and witty infectious disease specialist who is in love with Kitty, a spoiled middle-class British woman who accepted Walter’s proposal out of her will to get as far as possible from her family. Under circumstances, she cannot reciprocate her husband’s love since she found him boring. Unfortunately, she was caught having an affair with Charlie Townsend, a man who is a rich and very powerful man which Kitty finds attractive. As a result, Dr. Fane immediately volunteers himself to relocate to the middle of China where the core of the epidemic of Cholera killed thousands of Chinese citizens by the disease. Kitty & Walter knew that relocating to that place will kill both of them, but Dr. Fane still insists to move there and risk it all. Afterward, Kitty realized that his husband was doing the noble thing, and she saw his husband in a different light with all his charity, and empathy for the people of that town. She developed feelings for him. Thus, love was shared by the couple. Sadly, Dr. Fane died with Cholera, and Kitty returned to London where she took care of their 5-year-old son who may or may not be Walter’s son. It was surprising to me that I suddenly blushed when the actor Edward Norton acted while proposing to Naomi Watts’s character, Kitty. Am I know get attracted to the Caucasian race? Which I swear would not happen. I know they are merely actors, but I find him handsome. Are these preparation that someday I would marry a Caucasian gentleman? ? These are questions that are not ready to be answered, but I am glad I notice them. In the real world setting, Recently, I was coordinating with an Australian colleague usually I do not get attracted to their race, but this particular Aussie is an exemption. Every Friday, we have this so-called drinks and company debrief where we say our wins and whoops to the entire colleagues. On this special Friday, Jason, the particular Aussie revealed that he has a wife. I was disappointed when I heard this. Therefore, I was kind of have a thing for this person which I find surprisingly amazed since I never liked their kind but there it is. Now that I am aware of this situation, I may know how to approach it next time. Furthermore, since I am matured now, and I am very sensitive with marriage questions which I find annoying, and lonesome when I know the people that I met were all married. Well, I think I was disappointed since I am expecting that people would be the same as me which I felt secluded that I cannot relate to them. From now on, I should keep it to myself, and assume that people the same age as me are happily married, so I will not fantasies anymore. Having this weakness creates a way for evil thoughts to come to me, and people taking advantage of me since I am single. This will not bother me anymore and focus on the important things, and live a happy life on my own. In essence, this change in preferences of a potential mate is a fresh start for me. I never thought that it would come to me in my late thirties. It started with an attraction to actors now a particular person. This is the start of experiencing something strange to me. It would be handy when I migrate to a foreign land where the Caucasian race owns the city, maybe in the coming years or so, but I should focus more on settling in rather than fooling around with locals.
Preferences for the opposite gender confuses me at the moment. Previously, I
was attracted
to East Asian
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raaces
like Japanese and South Korean males.
However
, since I have been watching numerous English movies for a while. Somehow, I may be limiting myself to Asians.
Therefore
, I should widen it to the Caucasian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
race
which is a possibility since I am planning to migrate to greener Pasteur.

It is
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started
when I stumbled on the movie Painted veil on a paid cable where Edward Norton and Naomi Watts are the main
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actors
in that movie.
Surprisingly
, I admired the character of Walter
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Fane
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who
was played
by Edward Norton: a British gentleman, shy and witty infectious disease specialist
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who
is in
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love
with
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Kitty
, a spoiled middle-
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class
British woman
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who
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accepted
Walter’s proposal out of her will to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
as far as possible from her family. Under circumstances, she cannot reciprocate her husband’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
since she found him boring. Unfortunately, she
was caught
having an affair with Charlie Townsend, a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
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who
is a rich and
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very
powerful
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man
which
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Kitty
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finds
attractive.
As a result
, Dr.
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Fane
immediately volunteers himself to relocate to the middle of China where the core of the epidemic of Cholera killed thousands of Chinese citizens by the disease.
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Kitty
& Walter knew that relocating to that place will kill both of them,
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but
Dr.
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Fane
still
insists to
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move
there and
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risk
it all. Afterward,
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Kitty
realized that his husband was doing the noble thing, and she
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saw
his husband in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
light with all his charity, and empathy for the
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people
of that town. She developed feelings for him.
Thus
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
was shared
by the couple.
Sadly
, Dr.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Fane
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died
with Cholera, and
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Kitty
returned to London where she took care of their 5-year-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
son
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who
may or may not be Walter’s son. It was surprising to me that I
suddenly
blushed when the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
actor
Edward Norton acted while proposing to Naomi Watts’s character,
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Kitty
. Am I
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know
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get
attracted to the Caucasian
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race
?
“Which” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Which
I swear would not happen. I
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know
they are
merely
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actors
,
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but
I
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find
him handsome. Are
Did you mean "this preparation" or "these preparations"?
these preparation
that someday I would marry a Caucasian gentleman? ? These are questions that are not ready to
be answered
,
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but
I am glad I notice them.

In the real world setting, Recently, I was coordinating with an Australian colleague
usually
I do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
attracted to their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
race
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this particular Aussie is an exemption. Every Friday, we have this
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
-called drinks and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
debrief where we say our wins and whoops to the entire colleagues. On this special Friday, Jason, the particular Aussie revealed that he has a wife. I
was disappointed
when I heard this.
Therefore
, I was kind of have a thing for this person which I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
surprisingly
amazed since I never liked their kind
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there it is.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Now
that I am aware of this situation, I may
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know
how to approach it
next
time.
Furthermore
, since I
am matured
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now
, and I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
sensitive with marriage questions which I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
find
annoying, and lonesome when I
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know
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
that I met were all married. Well, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
I
was disappointed
since I am expecting that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would be the same as me which I felt secluded that I cannot relate to them. From
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now
on, I should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it to myself, and assume that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
the same age as me are
happily
married,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I will not
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "fantasy"
fantasies
anymore. Having this weakness creates a way for evil thoughts to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to me, and
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people
taking advantage of me since I am single. This will not bother me anymore and focus on the
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important
things, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a happy life on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
.

In essence, this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
in preferences of a potential mate is a fresh
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
for me. I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
that it would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to me in my late thirties. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
with an attraction to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
actors
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
now
a particular person. This is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
of experiencing something strange to me. It would be handy when I migrate to a foreign land where the Caucasian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
race
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
the city, maybe in the coming years or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I should focus more on settling in
rather
than fooling around with locals.
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IELTS essay Preferences for the opposite gender confuses me at the moment. Previously, I was attracted to East Asian races like Japanese and South Korean males. However, since I have been watching numerous English movies for a while. Somehow, I may be limiting myself to Asians. Therefore, I should widen it to the Caucasian race which is a possibility since I am planning to migrate to greener Pasteur.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
719 words
5.5
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