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There are a lot of advertisement of cigarettes and other harmful drugs on television these days. some people say that such advertisment should be banned do you agree or disagree

There are a lot of advertisement of cigarettes and other harmful drugs on television these days. some people say that such advertisment should be banned VrN6Q

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