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What is the most important thing in our life ?

What is the most important thing in our life? xa0X6
some people think money can change the world, this is the powerful thing in their life because we can use it to buy anything they want. But, they forgot the most important thing is humanity. Let me show you the reason. We are social animals, we can not live without friends and family. You are only dead when no one remembers about your existence. Is money mighty? if you think that, let thinks about your life without any relationship, you will feel alone and then you will live not by death.
some
people
think
money can
change
the world, this is the powerful thing in their life
because
we can
use
it to
buy
anything they want.
But
, they forgot the most
important
thing is humanity.
Let
me
show
you the reason. We are social animals, we can not
live
without friends and family. You are
only
dead when no one remembers about your existence. Is money mighty?
if
you
think
that,
let
thinks
about your life without any relationship, you will feel alone and then you will
live
not by death.
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IELTS essay What is the most important thing in our life?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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