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what is the most important invention of all the time? And what are the effects on people’s lives?

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During the technology-feeding frenzy of the late 1990s, many experts declared the Internet one of the most important inventions since the Industrial Revolution. However, as with all major technological and social changes, there are positive and negative effects of the internet on society too. The positive impacts of the internet are such as: • It provides effective communication using emailing and instant messaging services to any part of the world. • • Education has received a huge boost as uncountable books and journals are available online from libraries across the world. This has made research easier. The negative impacts that may affect people’s lives are: • Addiction to social networks can disrupt an individual’s life, both personally and professionally. • inappropriate materials online that isn't age-suitable
During the technology-feeding frenzy of the late 1990s,
many
experts declared the Internet one of the most
important
inventions since the Industrial Revolution.

However
, as with all major technological and social
changes
, there are
positive
and
negative
effects of the internet on society too.

The
positive
impacts of the internet are such as:

• It provides effective communication using emailing and instant messaging services to any part of the world.



• Education has received a huge boost as uncountable books and journals are available online from libraries across the world. This has made research easier.

The
negative
impacts that may affect
people
’s
lives
are:

• Addiction to social networks can disrupt an individual’s life, both
personally
and
professionally
.

• inappropriate materials online that isn't age-suitable
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IELTS essay what is the most important invention of all the time? And what are the effects on people’s lives?

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  American English
9 paragraphs
121 words
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