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What is the importance of healthy eating

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Food is one of the most important things we need to survive. Food gives us energies for activity, growth and all functions of the body such as: breathing, digesting food, maintaining body temperature at the warm state, …It is the material for our growth, the "hospice" to repair when our bodies get injured, keeping our immune systems be healthy. However, nowaday, people seem like they don’t consume food properly to leverage its benefits for their bodies. By that, it means many people still have very unhealthy diets which leads to the increase of rate in many common diseases such as obesity, diabetes, cancers, heart disease, …
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IELTS essay What is the importance of healthy eating

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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