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Some people think that it is an essential subject for children at school

Some people think that it is an essential subject for children at school BMbWV
firstly, art is an essential subject which children especially young public should learn in order to help and promote their creativity and imagination. Without imagination students will not able to make creativity things. But according to some masses art is a waste of time. I will discuss both the views in my clump of writingTo begin with there are considerable facts after the given notion, one of the main point which can be started is, Art is necessary for students to learn India school. Because, if they will start learning at then they can promote their imagination and creativity.
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and promote their creativity and imagination. Without imagination students will not able to
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make
creativity things.
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with there are considerable facts after the
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is, Art is necessary for students to learn India school.
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learning at then they can promote their imagination and creativity.
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IELTS essay Some people think that it is an essential subject for children at school

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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