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What is the cuisine you like most?

What is the cuisine you like most? n127R
Indian cuisine is various so that, I would call myself a huge fan of it for two main reasons. First and foremost, I am a foodie person and this is a key cause why I am a big fan of that cuisine. They have most spicy food and made from some delicious meat with rice. As a result, spicy originates power against some diseases and boost the immunity. Additionally, this cuisine has some soft drinks that made from various organic plants and vegetables. Apart from that, these drinks ease digestion and it prevents your stomach for future dangers. In conclusion, Indian cuisine had a great contribution for me in terms of both health and tasteful meal.
Indian
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that, I would call myself a huge fan of it for two main reasons.

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delicious meat with rice.
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diseases and boost the immunity.

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has
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soft drinks that made from various organic plants and vegetables. Apart from that, these drinks
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digestion and it
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had a great contribution for me in terms of both health and tasteful meal.

IELTS essay What is the cuisine you like most?

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