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What are advantages and disadvantages of the seaside towns compared to inland towns?

What are advantages and disadvantages of the seaside towns compared to inland towns? qaJoG
Seaside towns have fresh a quality air however, the main drawback is rainy weather is typical for these area. On the one hand, people live nearby seaside towns can take an advantage of breathing fresh air particularly in the mornings. Sea has a profound impact in this sense it plays a crucial role in order to filter and refreshes air. On the other hand, since, the city places around the sea this is why the wind leads to change the direction of clouds. As a result, pouring rain is unavoidable for the certain area. In conclusion, population can suffer from rainy weather but, they will have an opportunity to enjoy pure air.
Seaside towns have fresh a quality air
however
, the main drawback is rainy weather is typical for
Did you mean "this area" or "these areas"?
these area
.

On the one hand,
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people
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live
nearby seaside towns can take an advantage of breathing fresh air
particularly
in the mornings. Sea has a profound impact in this sense it plays a crucial role in order to filter and refreshes air.

On the other hand
, since, the city places around the sea this is why the wind leads to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the direction of clouds.
As a result
, pouring rain is unavoidable for the certain area.

In conclusion
, population can suffer from rainy weather
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but
, they will have an opportunity to enjoy pure air.
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IELTS essay What are advantages and disadvantages of the seaside towns compared to inland towns?

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