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What is the causes of obesity

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In some countries, the average weight of people is rising and their levels of health and fitness are increasingly deteriorating due to obesity, which leads to a great number of health problems such as heart attack and diabetes. The condition is pretty alarming among the world's most affluent Western countries. There are a number of reasons for obesity, each of which needs to be dealt with in a particular way.

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 is rising and their levels of health and fitness are increasingly
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 with in a particular way. 

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