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what is the best learning and growth experience you have ever felt?

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The day has finally arrived; I've done everything I can to prepare for this test, and all I can do now is wait for the results. . . . . . In sixth grade, I used to only play and sleep, but one day I was informed that I had an important exam, since I knew that I would fail the exam, I went to my mother for help. She began by teaching me Indonesian, then science, and finally math. The first was okay because I wasn't bad in Indonesia, and the second was science. It took me a long time to understand, but I was able to get some advice from my mother and remember it in the end. The final subject was math, which was the most difficult and took three days to master. When the test ended, I was given my score, and I was relieved to learn that I had passed every subject. When we went back to the normal class, I noticed that I was able to keep up with the classes from tips that my mother had told me. In conclusion, I am grateful to my mother for teaching me many tips and tricks that have aided me in future subjects.
The day has
finally
arrived; I've done everything I can to prepare for this
test
, and all I can do
now
is wait for the results.
.
.
.
.
.


In sixth grade, I
used
to
only
play and sleep,
but
one day I
was informed
that I had an
important
exam, since I knew that I would fail the exam, I went to my
mother
for
help
. She began by teaching me Indonesian, then science, and
finally
math. The
first
was okay
because
I wasn't
bad
in Indonesia, and the second was science. It took me a long time to understand,
but
I was able to
get
some
advice from my
mother
and remember it in the
end
. The final subject was math, which was the most difficult and took three days to master.

When the
test
ended, I was
given
my score, and I
was relieved
to learn that I had passed every subject. When we went back to the normal
class
, I noticed that I was able to
keep
up with the classes from tips that my
mother
had
told
me.

In conclusion
, I am grateful to my
mother
for teaching me
many
tips and tricks that have aided me in future subjects.
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IELTS essay what is the best learning and growth experience you have ever felt?

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4 paragraphs
207 words
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