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In the future, many people believe that students will learn through the internet without going to school, to what extent do you agree or disagree

In the future, many people believe that students will learn through the internet without going to school, KYG3R
Many people hold the belief that in the future, learners will not go to school for learning instead of learning from home through the Internet. I am partly in disagreement with this idea and I will examine my views in this essay. Teaching and learning at school have many benefits to both students and teachers. Since the first day, going to school was a traditional method for teaching students for many reasons (collective learning). First of all, teachers can exam their children on hard skills… Secondly, students need to develop their social skills with their friends as well as soft skills in solving daily problems such as: how to express their feelings, treat others and also control their behaviors. These skills will not be lacking if they do not go to school and study from home with four walls. Finally, either teachers or students should have the environment to communicate with each other to reduce the depression, anxiety which are the most popular in the world right now. However, learning from home also has its merits in many cases. For example, students must choose to learn online through media: Google Meet, Zoom, . . . because of the wide-spread of Covid-19 pandemic. It becomes a helpful method to adapt with the case to protect both students and teachers from infection. Online learning provides us with a way to review knowledge after school with a variety of courses available. To conclude, In my perspective, learning in school with introductions from teachers and cooperating with friends is the best way in education. Notwithstanding, learning from home with online platform matches with the current epidemic situation.
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from home through the Internet. I am partly in disagreement with this
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and I will examine my views in this essay.

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was a traditional method for teaching
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reasons (collective
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can exam their children on
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need to develop their social
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with their friends
as well
as soft
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skills
in solving daily problems such as: how to express their feelings, treat others and
also
control their behaviors. These
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will not be lacking if they do not go to
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school
and study from home with four walls.
Finally
, either
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should have the environment to communicate with each other to
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choose to learn online through media: Google
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of the wide-spread of Covid-19 pandemic. It becomes a helpful method to adapt with the case to protect both
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students
and
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teachers
from infection. Online
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provides us with a way to review knowledge after
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school
with a variety of courses available.

To conclude
, In my perspective,
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in
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with introductions from
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and cooperating with friends is the best way in education. Notwithstanding,
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from home with online platform matches with the
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current
epidemic situation.

IELTS essay In the future, many people believe that students will learn through the internet without going to school,

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273 words
6.0
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