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What is the best age for children to begin computer lessons?

What is the best age for children to begin computer lessons? Y26dQ
I think the answer really depends. You need to look at each child’s circumstances to decide what is best for them, for everything, not just for computer lessons. Most kids nowadays are not really into the computer but there is still some child that obsessed with technology so I think introducing them at a very young age could hinder their progressions such as physical ability and social development. On balance, I think the best age would be somewhere around 15.
I
think
the answer
really
depends. You need to look at each child’s circumstances to decide what is best for them, for everything, not
just
for computer lessons. Most kids nowadays are not
really
into the computer
but
there is
still
some
child that obsessed with technology
so
I
think
introducing them at a
very
young age could hinder their progressions such as physical ability and social development. On balance, I
think
the best age would be somewhere around 15.
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IELTS essay What is the best age for children to begin computer lessons?

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