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Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology?

Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology? MoQyQ
I think people are starting to realize the limitations and harmful effects of technology. Internet addiction is a scary problem and this usually happens to the young generations, they seem to feel joy in the unrealistic world rather than the outside world so they end up spending hours for it. It’s been scientific approval that overuse of the internet may lead to dangerous pathogens in the brain. Diminish the technology usage help us reconnect with our real lives and reduce the risk of disease
I
think
people
are starting to realize the limitations and harmful effects of technology. Internet addiction is a scary problem and this
usually
happens to the young generations, they seem to feel joy in the unrealistic world
rather
than the outside world
so
they
end
up spending hours for it. It’s been scientific approval that overuse of the internet may lead to
dangerous
pathogens in the brain. Diminish the technology usage
help
us reconnect with our real
lives
and
reduce
the
risk
of
disease
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IELTS essay Could you suggest some reasons why some people are deciding to reduce their use of technology?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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