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How much has technology improved how we communicate with each other? Do you agree that there are many more technological innovations to be made?

How much has technology improved how we communicate with each other? Do you agree that there are many more technological innovations to be made? dqm9P
due to the development of technology, communication changed tremendously. We can easily contact our lovers at any time, anywhere. Although there will be some distorted and confused because we use wifi connections to contact and it’s not like the wifi always stay stableabsolutely. Based on creativity and human intelligence, I am currently living in a high-tech world so it’s no doubt that in the future, there will be more breakthroughs to be made in science and technology
due
to the development of technology, communication
changed
tremendously
. We can
easily
contact our lovers at any time, anywhere. Although there will be
some
distorted and confused
because
we
use
wifi
connections to contact and it’s not like the
wifi
always stay
stableabsolutely
. Based on creativity and human intelligence, I am
currently
living in a high-tech world
so
it’s no doubt that in the future, there will be more breakthroughs to
be made
in science and
technology
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IELTS essay How much has technology improved how we communicate with each other? Do you agree that there are many more technological innovations to be made?

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