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How much has technology improved how we communicate with each other? Do you agree that there are many more technological innovations to be made?

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due to the development of technology, communication changed tremendously. We can easily contact our lovers at any time, anywhere. Although there will be some distorted and confused because we use wifi connections to contact and it’s not like the wifi always stay stableabsolutely. Based on creativity and human intelligence, I am currently living in a high-tech world so it’s no doubt that in the future, there will be more breakthroughs to be made in science and technology

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. We can easily
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Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)Wi-Fi
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 connections to contact and it’s not like the Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)Wi-Fi
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. Based on creativity and human intelligence, I am currently
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IELTS essay How much has technology improved how we communicate with each other? Do you agree that there are many more technological innovations to be made?

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American English

1 paragraphs

76 words

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