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what is the advantages and disadvanteges of ecotourism

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It has constantly been the subject of heated debate that ecotourism has significant advantages for many people. It is a fact that ecotourism has already become a popular and huge industry these days. It is my firm belief that the benefits of ecotourism are more sustainable than its demerits. That said, there are a few disadvantages that should be addressed. Above all, when indigenous cultures are regularly exposed to masses of tourists, their traditional cultural practices change or disappear. Locals may embrace and assimilate into tourists’ cultures, and they might abandon their own heritage. Tourists may also fail to respect local values and customs. It causes annoyance for the local people. The different cultures of strangers may disturb the local culture and causes social disruption. Secondly, although ecotourism tries its best to keep the adverse impact on environment to a minimum, chances are that the local wildlife will still be disturbed to a certain extent. When profit is involved, there is skepticism about the future of the ecosystem if the tourist organizations focus on marketing strategies alone without respect to the actual environment. On top of that, the wildlife getting distressed due to the human presence and this will affect their reproduction. Despite the aforementioned downsides, I believe that the merits of ecotourism are far greater than its demerits. First and foremost, it enables tourists to learn about the flora and fauna of a specific location. People can see the beauty of nature, and they have more chances of taking photos with beauty of nature. Another potential advantage is that ecotourism helps protect natural habitats and avoid pollution. For instance, ecotourists often shun cruise ships because these are among the biggest culprit in the tourism industry in terms of environmental pollution. The huge numbers of passengers on these ships generate many tons of garbage and wastewater, which is often dumped into the sea. Having considered a range of arguments, I have drawn the conclusion that although there are some negative impacts of ecotourism on local culture and wildlife, I believe that they are outweighed by the benefits it brings to the environment.
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been the subject of heated debate that ecotourism has significant advantages for
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. It is a fact that ecotourism has already become a popular and huge industry these days.
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It
is my firm belief that the benefits of ecotourism are more sustainable than its demerits.

That said, there are a few disadvantages that should
be addressed
.
Above all
, when indigenous
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cultures
are
regularly
exposed to masses of
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tourists
, their traditional cultural practices
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change
or disappear.
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Locals
may embrace and assimilate into
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tourists’
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cultures
, and they might abandon their
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own
heritage.
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Tourists
may
also
fail to respect
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local
values and customs. It causes annoyance for the
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local
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people
. The
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different
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cultures
of strangers may disturb the
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local
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culture
and causes social disruption.
Secondly
, although ecotourism tries its best to
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keep
the adverse impact on environment to a minimum, chances are that the
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local
wildlife will
still
be disturbed
to a certain extent. When profit
is involved
, there is skepticism about the future of the ecosystem if the
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tourist
organizations focus on marketing strategies alone without respect to the actual environment.
On top of that
, the wildlife getting distressed due to the human presence and this will affect their reproduction.

Despite the aforementioned downsides, I believe that the merits of ecotourism are far greater than its demerits.
First
and foremost, it enables
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tourists
to learn about the flora and fauna of a specific location.
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People
can
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see
the beauty of nature, and they have more chances of taking photos with beauty of nature. Another potential advantage is that ecotourism
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helps
protect natural habitats and avoid pollution.
For instance
, ecotourists
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often
shun cruise ships
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because
these are among the biggest culprit in the tourism industry in terms of environmental pollution. The huge numbers of passengers on these ships generate
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many
tons of garbage and wastewater, which is
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often
dumped into the sea.

Having considered a range of arguments, I have drawn the conclusion that although there are
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some
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negative
impacts of ecotourism on
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local
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culture
and wildlife, I believe that they
are outweighed
by the benefits it brings to the environment.
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IELTS essay what is the advantages and disadvanteges of ecotourism

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4 paragraphs
352 words
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