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Write a passage about how do you stay healthy.

Write a passage about how do you stay healthy. DqOpk
Nowadays, staying healthy is one of the most vital part in our life. In my opinion, there are three most useful ways to keep fit. First of all, stay in shape begins with have a balanced diet, which includes eating regularly and nutritiously. I usually choose more healthier food like: vegetable, . . . . . and eat less junk food to get more vitamin, which is really good for my health. Secondly, i often spend time to participate in physical activities like: doing sports, taking regular exercise, . . . . . It helps me to be more active and it also has a possitive impact on my health. In addition, when we do more outdoor activities, we can have a good body shape. Finally, having enough sleep also plays an important role in staying healthy. Sleep enough enhances our concentration so we can work and study better. Furthermore, a good sleep helps us to decrease the incidence and make our life better. In general, staying healthy is the most crucial part in our life, it enhances our life, so I always pay a lot of attention to it.
Nowadays, staying healthy is one of the most vital
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part
in our
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life
. In my opinion, there are three most useful ways to
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keep
fit.

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, stay in shape
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begins
with have a balanced diet, which includes eating
regularly
and
nutritiously
. I
usually
choose
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more healthier
food like: vegetable
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eat less junk food to
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get
more vitamin, which is
really
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good
for my health.

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i
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often
spend time to participate in physical activities like: doing sports, taking regular exercise
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, .
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helps
me to be more active and it
also
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possitive
impact on my health.
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, when we do more outdoor activities, we can have a
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good
body shape.

Finally
, having
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enough
sleep
also
plays an
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important
role in staying healthy. Sleep
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enough
enhances our concentration
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so
we can work and study better.
Furthermore
, a
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good
sleep
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helps
us to decrease the incidence and
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make
our
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life
better.

In general
, staying healthy is the most crucial part in our
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life
, it enhances our
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life
,
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so
I always pay
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a lot of
attention to it.
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IELTS essay Write a passage about how do you stay healthy.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
190 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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