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What is success? is it associated with money? is it measured based on fame or appearance

What is success? is it associated with money? is it measured based on fame or appearance 6Le08
The yardstick of success varies from person to person In the world we live in today, we have equated success to riches, prosperity, fame, appearance, houses and so many mundane things. but success is deeper than money or other superficial and physical things can we might acquire or own. as you know Money is very important to success in life but it is not a necessity and neither is it the only key to success in life. Success is simply the feeling of satisfaction and happiness one gets from leading a particular way of life or carrying out a particular activity. Success in any field or aspect of life can only be achieved through serious hard work and a little bit of opportunity. in my point of view, one of the most important recipes of success is determination and it even might as well be the most important secret of success, why so the stories of success are not created overnight. for success, We should follow our passion because that is where our heart and soul is. Don’t confine your ambitions to just making money. Listen to your heart and follow it. The voices within us are our guiding lights. in on my researches, I saw a sentence from, Anne Sweeney, who remained the president of the Disney Channel from 1996 to 2014. In her words, “Define success on your own terms, achieve it by your own rules, and build a life you’re proud to live.
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varies from person to person

In the world we
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in
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, we have equated
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to riches, prosperity, fame, appearance,
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houses
and
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mundane things.

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but
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is deeper than money or other superficial and physical things can we might acquire or
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own
.
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you know Money is
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very
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to
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in
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but
it is not a necessity and neither is it the
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only
key to
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in life.

Success is
simply
the feeling of satisfaction and happiness one
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gets
from leading a particular way of
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life
or carrying out a particular activity.
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Success
in any field or aspect of
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life
can
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only
be achieved
through serious
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hard
work and a
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little bit
of opportunity.

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in
my point of view, one of the most
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important
recipes of
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success
is determination and it even might
as well
be the most
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important
secret of
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success
, why
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so
the stories of
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are not created overnight.

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for
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success
, We should follow our passion
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because
that is
where our heart and soul is. Don’t confine your ambitions to
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just
making money. Listen to your heart and follow it. The voices within us are our guiding lights.

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in
on my researches, I
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saw
a sentence from, Anne Sweeney, who remained the president of the Disney Channel from 1996 to 2014. In her words, “Define
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success
on your
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own
terms, achieve it by your
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own
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rules
, and build a
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life
you’re proud to
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live
.
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IELTS essay What is success? is it associated with money? is it measured based on fame or appearance

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
246 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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