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Some people think that new house should be built in the same style as the older houses

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Some Experts throughout the developing and developed world, are debated that build houses must based on conventional style, while some believers view that have to be refer to individuals own choices, so in this essay I will shed the light on both views and I will provide examples associate with real life as well as I will support my Idea. Throughout the rapid development of technology, some viewers point that the building of house have to be in modren style and have not restrict people to choose their house 'style. The central reason behind that alot of individuals have different willing, however the have freedom to decide whatever they prefer. Also construction of ancient houses have never serve any people. Moreover all new equipment have played significant role to elivate the hard of life, For instance the mixture of colours which is use in painting houses help people to feel comfortable. It is distinguished the style of modern house, so as it notice the vast majority of communities prefer the latest style more than old fashioned house. Despite the arguing of house modernity model' importance to most people, but it still that some viewers argument that the old house style are more preferable for critical reasons. The main reason for believing this is that old fashion houses model indicate the identity of history so the communities like to remain all model relate to past. In addition antique house sometime be model of civilization, so some nations opine tend to this type of style to be different from the modern style. Appropriate illustration here that is some public in all part of the world provide this style on their public streets to prove their history identity. Personally, I strongly advocate that old house stly is the most model popular for my nation, because it relate the past with present. In conclusion, after all argument and examples which provide asscoaite to the old house model and modern house style. Ancient models house is more required because of its simplicity.
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must
based on conventional
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style
, while
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some
believers view that
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have to
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in this essay I will shed the light on both views and I will provide examples associate with real life
as well
as I will support my
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viewers point that the building of
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house
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have to
be in
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modren
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style
and have not
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people
to choose their
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'style. The central reason behind that
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alot
of individuals have
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different
willing,
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Also
construction of ancient
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houses
have never
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any
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.
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of life,
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colours
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use
in painting
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houses
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help
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people
to feel comfortable. It
is distinguished
the
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style
of modern
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house
,
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so
as it notice the vast majority of communities prefer the latest
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style
more than
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old fashioned
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house
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Despite the arguing of
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modernity model' importance to most
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,
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it
still
that
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argument that the
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house
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style
are more preferable for critical reasons. The main reason for believing this is that
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old
fashion
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houses
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model
indicate the identity of history
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so
the communities like to remain all
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relate to past. In
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antique
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sometime be
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of civilization,
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so
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some
nations opine tend to this type of
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to be
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from the modern
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. Appropriate illustration here
that is
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public in all part of the world provide this
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on their public streets to prove their history identity.
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, I
strongly
advocate that
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old
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house
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stly
is the most
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model
popular for my nation,
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the past with present.
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,
after all
argument and examples which provide
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to the
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old
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house
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model
and modern
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house
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style
. Ancient
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models
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is more required
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because
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IELTS essay Some people think that new house should be built in the same style as the older houses

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
337 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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