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What is something you like about yourself?

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When i'm first read this question i kind of feel nervous but also feel kind of interested at the same time. I don't think i'm perfect because no one are but i self-assured that i'm the best version of myself. Thing i love most about myself is i always try to ehance and become a better person. I used to be a shy girl who always getting body shaming, at that time i feel very inferiority about myself but slowly i changed i don't complain about my body of my face anymore, i focus more in myself and ignored those words. I try to workout every leisure time, i learn to take care of my skin and study how to makeup so right now i'm kind of confident about myself. I have to thank people who used to criticized me so i can aware of my shortcoming so that i can be a wonderful person right now. I also like about myself that i'm an empathetic listener. I listen to everyone and give them advices so that a lot of my friends come to me when they need to reveal problems. I love talking about myself but i think that is enough for you to know. And lastly i want to say that everyone should learn to love every part about themself don't let people judge you for who you are.
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think
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perfect
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no one are
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i self-assured that
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i'm
the best version of myself.

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love
most about myself is
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always try to
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ehance
and become a better person. I
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to be a shy girl who always getting body shaming, at that time
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feel
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inferiority about myself
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slowly
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don't complain about my body of my face anymore,
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i
focus more in myself and
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ignored
those words. I try to workout every leisure time,
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i
learn to take care of my skin and study how to makeup
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so
right
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now
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i'm
kind of confident about myself.
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thank
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used
to criticized me
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i
can aware of my shortcoming
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that
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can be a wonderful person right
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also
like about myself that
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i'm
an empathetic listener.
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I
listen to everyone and give them advices
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that
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a lot of
my friends
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come
to me when they need to reveal problems.

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I
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love
talking about myself
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but
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i
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think
that is
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enough
for you to know. And
lastly
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i
want to say that everyone should learn to
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love
every part about
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themself
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judge you for who you are.
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IELTS essay What is something you like about yourself?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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