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What is significance of academic debates? Narrate for argument with necessary point and denote with negative or positive factors contributing to the given topic.

What is significance of academic debates? Narrate for argument with necessary point and denote with negative or positive factors contributing to the given topic. pRKA3
These days, academic arguments had vital impact on providing opportunities for individual. There are numerous positive outcomes that can be achieved from educational debating but there are also possible harmful effects connected to it. One of the advantages of academic debates is people gained awareness and knowledge on social issues. In fact, debate conducted under educational institution aimed to develop their critical thinking and communication ability. This in return, may lead to provides proper attitudes and skills to real-life debates. Furthermore, it is helpful to students will be able to express their opinions in safe environment. Evidently, individual who actively participated in debate were more likely to speak out on something they believe useful. Making a greater contribution on our society. Meanwhile, it cannot be denied that those engaged on academic debate provides greater research and questioning skills over their peers. For example, there is ongoing arguments regarding abortion for those unwanted pregnancy. This affects the view of student because they need to analyze the important factors regarding this issue like culture, religion. To illustrate, in dominantly Roman Catholic countries like Philippines-abortion is not legalize. The significant part of the arguments, they are able to present both sides of issues. Contributing to the individual to have excellent education than those who do not participate. Academic discussion can be beneficial for number of reasons but there are also disastrous consequences to others. But from my perspective, attaining more confidence to stand up for truth is its significant outcome. However, one of disadvantages of academic arguments is some people can be offended when their view of point challenged.
These days,
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academic
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arguments
had vital impact on providing opportunities for individual. There are numerous
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positive
outcomes that can
be achieved
from educational debating
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but
there are
also
possible harmful effects connected to it.

One of the advantages of
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academic
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debates
is
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people
gained awareness and knowledge on social issues. In fact,
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debate
conducted under educational institution aimed to develop their critical thinking and communication ability. This in return, may lead to provides proper attitudes and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
to real-life
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debates
.
Furthermore
, it is helpful to students will be able to express their opinions in safe environment.
Evidently
, individual who
actively
participated in
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debate
were more likely to speak out on something they believe useful. Making a greater
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contribution on
our society.

Meanwhile, it cannot
be denied
that those engaged on
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academic
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debate
provides greater research and questioning
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
over their peers.
For example
, there is ongoing
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arguments
regarding abortion for those unwanted pregnancy. This affects the view of student
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because
they need to analyze the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
factors regarding this issue like culture, religion. To illustrate, in
dominantly
Roman Catholic countries like Philippines-abortion is not
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legalize
. The significant part of the
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arguments
, they are able to present both sides of issues. Contributing to the individual to have excellent education than those who do not participate.

Academic discussion can be beneficial for number of reasons
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but
there are
also
disastrous
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consequences to
others.
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But
from my perspective, attaining more confidence to stand up for truth is its significant outcome.
However
, one of disadvantages of
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academic
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arguments
is
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some
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people
can
be offended
when their view of point challenged.
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IELTS essay What is significance of academic debates? Narrate for argument with necessary point and denote with negative or positive factors contributing to the given topic.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
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