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Discuss about positive and negative affect of tourists

Discuss about positive and negative affect of tourists g5Wwl

Annually many tourists everywhere in the world and travel to the whole of the Earth we want to discuss about the positive and negative impact of The Tourists nowadays every country in the world depending on the tourists that meaning they don't have any any industry and economic jobs to do and tourism is their income so they have to admit the bad negative from this industry that include illness and molesr their environment and animal generally this industry has a benefit and harm to increase benefit and reduce harm we should do important things for example write a recommendation for tourists and explain for them or put fine for every mistake for example if one of the tourists dropped the occupation on the floor or he or she has to pay fine and every infractions such as a drawing or writing Memento on a statue or antiguities. That's my idea about this.

Annually
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 everywhere in the world and travel to the whole of the Earth we want to Did you mean simply "discuss the"? You do not need the word "about" here.discuss the
discuss about the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact of The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
Tourists
 nowadays every country in the world depending on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 that meaning they don't have Possible typo: you repeated a wordany
any any
 industry and economic jobs to do and tourism is their income This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 admit the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 from this industry that include illness and Possible spelling mistake found.molesmolestmoles r
molesr
 their environment and animal generally
 this industry has a benefit and harm to increase benefit and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 harm we should do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 things for example
 write a recommendation for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 for them or put fine for every mistake for example
 if one of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvisitorsightseertraveler
tourists
 dropped the occupation on the Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).floor, or
floor or
 he or she This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 pay fine and every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "infraction"?infraction
infractions
 such as a drawing or writing Memento on a statue or Possible spelling mistake found.antiquities
antiguities
. That's my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about this. 