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What is more important: the appearance or the characters of a person?

What is more important: the appearance or the characters of a person? e8B2p
I comply with the topic, “Personality is more important than looks”. Both of these adjectives fall under two different domains. There is something called Inner Beauty and Outer Beauty. Personality is something that we call inner beauty which refers to the mindset and character of a person and Looks is something that we call outer beauty which simply refers to the physical appearance of a person. In my opinion, looks can never be a factor based on which an individual should be judged. How we look, What’s the colour of our skin, Short or Tall, all these traits are God-Gifted and we ain’t the one who can manipulate it. Looks or Outer Beauty is the one that can be pretended. There are many ways in which a person can look good, be it Dressing, Make-up, Surgery, or any other treatments but Inner beauty can’t be pretended. It reflects in the behaviour and attitude of a person. A person may possess a very good and dashing appearance but if he doesn’t have morals, ethics, and good personality, he will still be considered evil. Sometimes, outer beauty gets more significance, for instance, in fashion shows. Over there, the people will rate you according to your looks and appearance. However, even in a fashion show, the contestants need a positive personality. If he/she possesses a negative personality, it will be very difficult for him/her to win the crown because personality reflects in your attitude. Moreover, beauty is just a short – sustaining bonus of nature. It doesn’t last for too long with any individual. As you grow older and older, the beauty starts to fade. The only thing which will remain with us until our last breath is our inner beauty which is our personality, our attitude, and behaviour towards others. Even after demise, people will remember us for our behaviour, kindness, and professionalism and not on the ground of our appearance. There is a common saying that, “Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder”. It ravishingly explains that it depends upon the person with whom you are dealing with whether you look attractive to them or not. Not all people will judge you by the looks you possess, some will still consider you beautiful, even if you are not, because of the personality you possess. However, there are still many people who lack this moral and run after appearance rather than personality. They will pretend in front of everyone that they don’t care for looks but they do. Let’s take an example of George Floyd, a black man who was killed by white police officers in Minneapolis in the United States recently. Worldwide, over millions of people are protesting for him with a phrase, “Black Lives Matter” and the social media platforms are also flooded with these hashtags but deep down we all know that most of them themselves run after physical appearance of the person. When they have to find a bridegroom for their daughters, most of them will try their best to find one with better looks and wealth rather than inner beauty and behaviour, which is the most important one for keeping their daughters happy for a lifetime. So, there’s a drastic need for change in people’s mentality. They should heartily accept that not only Black but all lives matter and look is not a criterion for deciding which person is gentle and which is not. As a conclusion, I must say that a person should focus on and work on his personality. He should make sure that his behaviour and attitude are not hurting anyone and people consider him a wise and gentle person. Whatever beautifulness and smartness you try to manoeuvre, but at the end of the day, if you don’t get moral pleasure and peace of mind, that you have done right to all those you met throughout the day, you won’t be considered a beautiful person. And this moral pleasure comes from nowhere other than people’s blessings. So, it doesn’t matter at all whether you are good looking or not, you have to be well-behaved and possess inner beauty and you will be praised everywhere.
I comply with the topic,
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“Personality
is more
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important
than
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looks”
. Both of these adjectives fall under two
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different
domains. There is something called Inner
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Beauty
and
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Outer
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Beauty
.
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Personality
is something that we call inner
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beauty
which refers to the mindset and character of a
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person
and
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Looks
is something that we call
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outer
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beauty
which
simply
refers to the physical
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appearance
of a
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person
. In my opinion,
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looks
can never be a factor based on which an individual should
be judged
. How we
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look
, What’s the
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colour
of our skin, Short or Tall, all these traits are
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God-Gifted and
we
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ain’t
the one who can manipulate it.

Looks or
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Outer
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Beauty
is the one that can
be pretended
. There are
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many
ways in which a
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person
can
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look
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good
, be it Dressing,
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Make
-up, Surgery, or any other treatments
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but
Inner
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beauty
can’t
be pretended
. It reflects in the
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behaviour
and
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attitude
of a
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person
. A
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person
may
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possess
a
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very
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good
and dashing
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appearance
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but
if he doesn’t have
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morals
, ethics, and
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good
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personality
, he will
still
be considered
evil.

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Sometimes
,
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outer
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beauty
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gets
more significance,
for instance
, in fashion
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shows
. Over there, the
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people
will rate you according to your
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looks
and
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appearance
.
However
, even in a fashion
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show
, the contestants need a
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positive
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personality
. If he/she
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possesses
a
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negative
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personality
, it will be
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very
difficult for him/her to win the crown
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because
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personality
reflects in your
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attitude
.
Moreover
,
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beauty
is
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just
a short
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–
sustaining bonus of nature. It doesn’t last for too long with any individual. As you grow older and older, the
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beauty
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starts
to fade. The
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only
thing which will remain with us until our last breath is our inner
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beauty
which is our
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personality
, our
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attitude
, and
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behaviour
towards others. Even after demise,
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people
will remember us for our
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behaviour
, kindness, and professionalism and not on the ground of our appearance.

There is a common saying that,
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“Beauty
lies in the eyes of the beholder”. It
ravishingly
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explains
that it depends upon the
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person
with whom you are dealing with whether you
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look
attractive to them or not. Not all
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people
will judge you by the
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looks
you
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possess
,
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some
will
still
consider you
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beautiful
, even if you are not,
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because
of the
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personality
you possess.

However
, there are
still
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many
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people
who lack this
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moral
and run after
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appearance
rather
than
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personality
. They will pretend in front of everyone that they don’t care for
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looks
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but
they do.
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Let
’s take an example of George Floyd, a black
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man
who
was killed
by white police officers in Minneapolis in the United States recently. Worldwide, over millions of
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people
are protesting for him with a phrase, “Black
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Lives
Matter” and the social media platforms are
also
flooded with these hashtags
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but
deep down we all know that most of them themselves run after physical
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appearance
of the
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person
. When they
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have to
find a bridegroom for their daughters, most of them will try their best to find one with better
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looks
and wealth
rather
than inner
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beauty
and
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behaviour
, which is the most
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important
one for keeping their daughters happy for a lifetime.
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So
, there’s a drastic need for
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change
in
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people’s
mentality. They should
heartily
accept that not
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only
Black
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but
all
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lives
matter and
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look
is not a criterion for deciding which
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person
is gentle and which is not.

As a conclusion, I
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must
say that a
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person
should focus on and work on his
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personality
. He should
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make
sure that his
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behaviour
and
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attitude
are not hurting anyone and
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people
consider him a wise and gentle
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person
. Whatever
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beautifulness
and smartness you try to
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manoeuvre
,
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but
at the
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end
of the day, if you don’t
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get
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moral
pleasure and peace of mind, that you have done right to all those you met throughout the day, you won’t
be considered
a
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beautiful
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person
. And this
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moral
pleasure
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comes
from nowhere other than
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people’s
blessings.

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So
, it doesn’t matter at all whether you are
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good looking
or not, you
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have to
be well-behaved and
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possess
inner
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beauty
and you will
be praised
everywhere.
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IELTS essay What is more important: the appearance or the characters of a person?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
691 words
5.5
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