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What is Morality. Can we speak about morality falling?

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Morality of The World It’s probably true to say that the statement of morality seems easy for understanding. Every person realizes what is right or wrong, what actions we mustn’t do and in what way we could express our best side. But let’s distinguish morality like a complex object and try to analyze if each of pieces is actual in modern society. I presume that such notions like friendship, family, marriage in its classical meaning now has modified value than in XX century. There can be no doubt that mean of human’s relations is unchangeable. Old friends are devoted and sympathetic, but could we open our mind to someone less known? Even if don’t dig deeply, it’s hard to smile or begin talking with a stranger. Each day citizens became more self-closed and doubtfully. Personal profit has shifted on the first place. Someone tries to find it and other avoids to be used. As a matter of fact, such individuals don’t see the wood for trees. Other notion I’d like to open widely is a relationships and marriage. As a divorced person in a certain period of my life I have lost belief in a marriage values. Not even cause of my life experience, but seeing the surrounding examples. And the most disgusting is that such situations are looking like usual even normal part of family life from the man’s side. I am talking about having an affair. As one person said, he just can’t sleep with one woman during the rest of life, but family is the saint. Contradictory words, isn’t it? I know a man, with whom I was in love for a long time, but now we almost don’t communicate. One time he arrived to me just for seeing and talking. I was a little bit confused, because he has a wife and two children. In that evening he had left his male company to visit me. I asked: «How did you explain your going away to friends? ” And he answered that all of them were going to their lovers and he too. Those words crashed all my goods about marriage and men at all. Unfortunately, it is just a drop in the sea. Another strange occurrence in modern society is a polyamory. Approximately, treason makes into a new form of relationships in which each of couple has right to have a sex with everyone he wants. Sex blogger Masha Chesnokova argues that there is a strong difference between the polyamory and a banal treason. This person is in an open marriage and shares with rules, ideas and emotions of polygamy. Specific sources claimed that in polyamory all lovers must know about an affair of other partner and accept these terms. It is not polyamory or open marriage if you are being unfaithful to your partner. From my point of view I’d like to add that this rule is an advantage of such relations exactly cause of the honesty and consciousness. Personally I don’t see immorality in polyamory, it is just another level of trust. But I am not ready for this. May be the reason is in my monogamy nature. And judging by friends comments, residents are not ready too. But as we know all new and strange is hard to understand immediately, perhaps with time being something will change. In the conclusion, let’s turn to the main object we speak - morality. As we could see it is a wide notion with indistinct boundaries. You could agree or not with some rules and basis. At this moment I came up with the Sokrat quotation “I know that I know nothing”. It absolutely concerns to the society changes and relativity of the moral notions. But in dependence of surrounding society we must reveal a tolerance. The main difference between human and animal is thinking ability. I speculate that this skill would help us to adapt to all innovations and don’t be absorb by an animal instinct or immoral appearances.
Morality
of The World

It’s
probably
true to say that the statement of
morality
seems easy for understanding. Every
person
realizes what is right or
wrong
, what actions we mustn’t do and in what way we could express our best side.
But
let
’s distinguish
morality
like a complex object and try to analyze if each of pieces is actual in modern society.

I presume that such
notions
like friendship, family,
marriage
in its classical meaning
now
has modified value than in XX century. There can be no doubt that mean of
human’s relations
is unchangeable.
Old
friends
are devoted
and sympathetic,
but
could we
open
our mind to someone less known? Even if don’t dig
deeply
, it’s
hard
to smile or
begin
talking with a stranger. Each day citizens became more self-closed and
doubtfully
. Personal profit has shifted on the
first
place. Someone tries to find it and other
avoids to be
used
. As a matter of fact, such individuals don’t
see
the wood for trees.

Other
notion
I’d like to
open
widely
is a relationships and
marriage
.
As
a divorced
person
in a certain period of my
life
I have lost belief in a
marriage
values. Not even cause of my
life
experience,
but
seeing the surrounding examples. And the most disgusting is that such situations are looking like usual even normal part of family
life
from the
man
’s side. I am talking about having an affair. As one
person
said, he
just
can’t sleep with one woman during the rest of
life
,
but
family is the saint. Contradictory words, isn’t it?

I
know
a
man
, with whom I was in
love
for a long time,
but
now
we almost don’t communicate. One time he arrived to me
just
for seeing and talking. I was a
little bit
confused,
because
he has a wife and two children. In that evening he had
left
his male
company
to visit me. I asked: «How did you
explain
your going away to friends? ” And he answered that all of them were going to their
lovers and
he too. Those words crashed all my
goods
about
marriage
and
men
at all. Unfortunately, it is
just
a drop in the sea.

Another strange occurrence in modern society is
a polyamory
. Approximately, treason
makes
into a new form of relationships in which each of couple has right to have a sex with everyone he wants. Sex blogger
Masha
Chesnokova
argues that there is a strong difference between the polyamory and a banal treason. This
person
is in an
open
marriage
and shares with
rules
,
ideas
and emotions of polygamy. Specific sources claimed that in polyamory all lovers
must
know
about an affair of other partner and accept these terms. It is not polyamory or
open
marriage
if you are being unfaithful to your partner. From my point of view I’d like to
add
that this
rule
is an advantage of such relations exactly cause of the honesty and consciousness.
Personally
I don’t
see
immorality in polyamory, it is
just
another level of trust.
But
I am not ready for this.
May be
the reason is in my monogamy nature. And judging by friends comments, residents are not ready too.
But
as we
know
all new and strange is
hard
to understand immediately, perhaps with time being something will
change
.

In the conclusion,
let
’s turn to the main object we speak
-
morality
.
As
we could
see
it is a wide
notion
with indistinct boundaries. You could
agree
or not with
some
rules
and basis. At this moment I came up with the
Sokrat
quotation “I
know
that I
know
nothing”. It
absolutely
concerns to the society
changes
and relativity of the moral
notions
.
But
in dependence of surrounding society we
must
reveal a tolerance. The main difference between human and animal is thinking ability. I speculate that this
skill
would
help
us to adapt to all innovations and don’t be
absorb
by an animal instinct or immoral appearances.
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