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What is he doing. Also try and answer the ‘why’ about what he is doing.

What is he doing. Also try and answer the ‘why’ about what he is doing. 6KrX3
In my perspective, Simon goes to the jungle by himself and under the creepers and bushes to stay alone from the boys. In addition, Simon prefers to be alone more and seems he is frustrated since there were lots of arguments between the boys. In conclusion, being the only guy who is in in the jungle with darkness looks peaceful and normally for him. In my perspective, Simon goes to the jungle by himself and under the creepers and bushes to stay alone from the boys. In addition, Simon prefers to be alone more and seems he is frustrated since there were lots of arguments between the boys. In conclusion, being the only guy who is in in the jungle with darkness looks peaceful and normally for him.
In my perspective, Simon goes to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jungle
by himself and under the creepers and bushes to stay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
In addition
, Simon prefers to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
more and seems he
is frustrated
since there were lots of arguments between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
conclusion, being the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
guy who is
Possible typo: you repeated a word
in in
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jungle
with darkness looks peaceful and
normally
for him.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
my perspective, Simon goes to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jungle
by himself and under the creepers and bushes to stay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
addition, Simon prefers to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
alone
more and seems he
is frustrated
since there were lots of arguments between the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
boys
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
conclusion, being the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
guy who is
Possible typo: you repeated a word
in in
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jungle
with darkness looks peaceful and
normally
for him.
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IELTS essay What is he doing. Also try and answer the ‘why’ about what he is doing.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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