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Some people believe that police should use guns to control criminals while others think that guns should not be used. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that police should use guns to control criminals while others think that guns should not be used. 8GVXm
The population growth, booming economy and rapid urbanization in today's world cause the rise of crime with sophisticated forms of crime and modern weapons. People have different views of whether police should be armed with guns. From my perspective, gun is an indispensable weapon in combating crimes. On one hand, the widespread use of guns among the police may rise the risk of accidents in crowded places. For instance, police officers who force carries guns can lose control and shoot an unarmed criminal or an innocent person which lead to unexpected casualties. To deal with this problem, instead of using guns, police can use many alternatives such as tear gas, sprays and electric shock weapons. Another solution is to allow only special police units who have to face with armed offenders. On the other hand, I strongly agree that police should be armed with guns to ensure security for the people. Criminals are becoming increasingly dangerous with modern weapons that require police officers to be well armed. In many cases, shooting is the best choice at the time. For example, police need to use guns when they are attacked by dangerous criminals in self-defense. Furthermore, to prevent dangerous criminals from escaping which may cause threats to the safety of the public, shooting is the most reasonable choice for the police. It cannot be denied that, the threat of a gun can arrest criminals and avoid physical violence. With guns, police officers can force a criminal to surrender quickly, reduce the panic for surrounding people. In conclusion, I strongly believe that police should be well-equipped with guns due to the increasing level of armed criminals.
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is an indispensable
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in combating crimes.

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may rise the
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of accidents in crowded places.
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police
officers who force carries
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guns
can lose control and shoot an unarmed
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criminal
or an innocent person which lead to unexpected casualties. To deal with this problem,
instead
of using
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guns
,
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police
can
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alternatives such as tear gas, sprays and electric shock
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weapons
. Another solution is to
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special
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offenders.

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to ensure security for the
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people
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are becoming
increasingly
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dangerous
with modern
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that require
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police
officers to be well
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armed
. In
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cases, shooting is the best choice at the time.
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police
need to
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use
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guns
when they
are attacked
by
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criminals
in self-defense.
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, to
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prevent
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dangerous
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criminals
from escaping which may cause threats to the safety of the public, shooting is the most reasonable choice for the
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police
. It cannot
be denied
that, the threat of a
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gun
can arrest
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criminals
and avoid physical violence. With
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guns
,
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police
officers can force a
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criminal
to surrender
quickly
,
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reduce
the panic for surrounding
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people
.

In conclusion
, I
strongly
believe that
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police
should be well-equipped with
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guns
due to the increasing level of
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armed
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criminals
.

IELTS essay Some people believe that police should use guns to control criminals while others think that guns should not be used.

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274 words
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