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What is essential to study at university has always been discussed by people all over the world, some people believe students should study the science of food and how to prepare it while on the contrary others believe that school is essential to learn important subjects. Nowadays, there are numerous courses that students could choose from. Some people believe that study the science of food and how to prepare is not an important subject. I totally disagree with these people, doesn't exist subjects that are more or less essential than others, everyone must have the possibility to follow your dream. Fortunately, there are a number of people that support not just the classic subject, on the contrary, they are curious to study new and interesting subjects. For instance, some years ago a friend of mine, decided to study the Chinese language. Some friends said why have you chosen this subject? or why you don't study an essential subject? Probably for some friends was a crazy choice, on the

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