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what i prefer in hoildays and how it will be

what i prefer in hoildays and how it will be Yyaxd
i want to say this days hoildays are very important everyone try to take it for relax from hard life and stress sk people take it seurious and try the best to go new places to have new experince and seashore. nature i last holiday was in egypt it. was fantastic i engoyed sea pyramids everything was great hope next one will be in new place. i will make plan to go new place with new advanture i maybe invite family so we get it together to enjoy maybe we go europ next holiday
i
want to say
this days
hoildays
are
very
important
everyone
try
to take it for relax from
hard
life and
stress
sk
people
take it
seurious
and try the best to go
new
places to have
new
experince
and seashore.
nature
i
last holiday was in
egypt
it. was fantastic i
engoyed
sea pyramids everything was great hope
next
one will be in
new
place.
i
will
make
plan to go
new
place with
new
advanture
i
maybe invite family
so
we
get
it together to enjoy maybe we go
europ
next
holiday
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IELTS essay what i prefer in hoildays and how it will be

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