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how sport is import and how it effect in our life

how sport is import and how it effect in our life 55Qym
Now days sport is most import thing in our life everyone should do for me I like to train everyday its make me so happy and everyone have to its make our health and life great its change so much in our life sport is the great thing to orgnaize everything its so fantastice to effect in our life there much people who start take it part of life for me i do sport everyday i went to gym and swimming its make me feel so great and happy plus healthy. I think its time to everyone start to change his lifr by sport bow every countery pay much money to make it happen to build better future cause sport is so effect and great it help youth to have better future great life and goals! hope so soon everyone star plan to makr sport the most import thing in life and change youth for better life and there so much exmples what sport make and change in people it way to fight drugs and addicted so its timr to world make it the most important goal
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IELTS essay how sport is import and how it effect in our life

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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