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Lessons on leaving the world better than you found it.

Lessons on leaving the world better than you found it. VEa86
It is undeniable that actually we want to conscious how we can trying to live in the world better than we found. Initially, we must do some beneficial things to soar our well-being. Notwithstanding, they can illustrates this by helping other people dramatically and primary we migh connect with individuals. Nevertheless, they can do such a thing to safeguard our environment and ecosystems. Whereas the best example of this, is cycling. As a consequence it can be significantly plummeted the pollution of the global world. In conclusion, we must safeguard their future generations. As a result, this is for how we acting for better tomorrow.
It is undeniable that actually we want to conscious how we can
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trying
to
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live
in the world better than we found.
Initially
, we
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must
do
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some
beneficial things to soar our well-being. Notwithstanding, they can
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illustrates
this by helping other
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people
dramatically
and primary we
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migh
connect with individuals.
Nevertheless
, they can do such a thing to safeguard our environment and ecosystems. Whereas the best example of this, is cycling.
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As
a consequence it can be
significantly
plummeted the pollution of the global world.
In conclusion
, we
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must
safeguard their future generations.
As a result
, this is for how
Did you mean "we're acting", "we are acting", or "we were acting"?
we acting
for better tomorrow.

IELTS essay Lessons on leaving the world better than you found it.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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