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What extent should government do to increase working conditions for teachers?

What extent should government do to increase working conditions for teachers? 1Aejq
It is approving opinion that teachers are the basis of all other professions. It would be right decision if the government supply masters with a number of paramount convenience at their work place. There are a range of options for that. At the touch of the button, government should allocate some money to subcidise instructors' outcomes. They have to spend a great deal of salary on nonpersonal expenses like documents, visual aids and several pieces of stationary. If the government cover theses expenses by subsidising the teachers' outcome it could be a motivation for them. Another obvious reason is authority should require deep respect for teachers. Some parents try to complaint or do legal actions to teacher's behaviour toward their children.
It is approving opinion that teachers are the basis of all other professions. It would be right decision if the
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government
supply masters with a number of paramount convenience at their work place. There are a range of options for that. At the touch of the button,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should allocate
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some
money to
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subcidise
instructors' outcomes. They
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have to
spend a great deal of salary on
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nonpersonal
expenses like documents, visual aids and several pieces of stationary. If the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
cover
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theses
expenses by
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subsidising
the teachers' outcome it could be a motivation for them. Another obvious reason is authority should require deep respect for teachers.
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Some
parents try to complaint or do legal actions to teacher's
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behaviour
toward their children.
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IELTS essay What extent should government do to increase working conditions for teachers?

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