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The chart illustrates results of the survey about adult education.

The chart illustrates results of the survey about adult education. 5a9jn
These two graphs illustrate results of the survey about adult education. Bar chart shows reasons to study for adults. Pie chart displays how the prices of adult education should be distributed. In the bar chart 40% of people choose interest in the subject, while 38% chose to gain qualification as a reason to study. The lowest percentage has met people, people chose this reason nearly ten percent.
These two graphs illustrate results of the survey about adult education. Bar chart
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shows
reasons to study for adults. Pie chart displays how the prices of adult education should
be distributed
.

In the bar chart 40% of
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people
choose interest in the subject, while 38% chose to gain qualification as a reason to study. The lowest percentage has met
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people
,
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people
chose this reason
nearly
ten percent.
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IELTS essay The chart illustrates results of the survey about adult education.

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  American English
2 paragraphs
67 words
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