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What electronic devices would you like to buy in the future?

What electronic devices would you like to buy in the future? NmeMb

The electronic product that I would like to buy is an Apple Watch. it is a famous product in the world and very popular in Vietnam. An apple watch possesses all the features of a smartphone, but most of all, it is much lighter and more convenient. In addition, the manufacturer has now added amazing features such as warning when the sound is too loud, detecting people falling and calling for help, monitoring heart rate. . . . All in all, this is a device worth considering and experiencing

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