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Is today's situation is good to visit tourist places. Advantages and disadvantages.

Is today's situation is good to visit tourist places. Advantages and disadvantages. 6NB63
Our world is filled with beatiful nature then how we can stop people to visit it? keep them away to loot the beauty however, people should see the condition and plan a trip if weather is bad and covid restrications they should consider. Firstly, We have all legal right to enjoy the nature take advantage of it. We are having world class places every one must visit atleast once in their life like zoos, lakes, waterfalls, treaking, historical places etc. If we keep visiting the places you will feel you are very close to nature along with that you will get lot of knowledge about the wild animals this kind of knowledge will get only from nature. Moreover if you maintain your counties tourisum then it will help to boost economy of the county. As people all over the world will come to your county to make a visit, they may come to get knowledge and for that information they will pay certain amount to reseach. They are pros and cons for it at this current situations people should take care of health measures before they visit such kind of places. On other side of it, I am not agree on the statement that people should go to tourist places at this pandamic situations. Once situations is in control government will start the toutisim on pace. As lot of money is coming from tousium and it helps in the country's growth. So, once covid takes downcurve shape, lockdown restrications will ease down and after that people can plan to visit such places. If people keep visiting such kind of places irrespective of the situation then it may led to diffulties to each and every individual. Lastly, I would like to give my opinion by keeping current situation in mind that we should stop visiting tourist places atleast for some time. It will not only help our country to come out of this covid pandamic but also your family and you will be safe. If we follow government headlines strictly then as soon as we can go and visit the places.
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beatiful
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nature
then how we can
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people
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visit
it?
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keep
them away to loot the beauty
however
,
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people
should
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see
the condition and plan a trip if weather is
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bad
and
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covid
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restrications
they should consider.

Firstly
, We have all legal right to enjoy the
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nature
take advantage of it. We are having world
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class
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places
every one
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must
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visit
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atleast
once in their life like zoos, lakes, waterfalls,
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treaking
, historical
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places
etc.
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we
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keep
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you will feel you are
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very
close to
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nature
along with that you will
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get
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lot of
knowledge about the wild animals this kind of knowledge will
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get
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only
from
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nature
.
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Moreover
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tourisum
then it will
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help
to boost economy of the county. As
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people
all over the world will
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come
to your county to
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make
a
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visit
, they may
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come
to
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get
knowledge and for that information they will pay certain amount to
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reseach
. They are pros and cons for it at this
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current
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situations
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people
should take care of health measures
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before
they
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visit
such kind of places.

On other side of it, I am not
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people
should go to tourist
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places
at this
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pandamic
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.
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is in control
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government
will
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the
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toutisim
on pace. As
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lot of
money is coming from
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tousium
and it
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helps
in the country's growth.
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covid
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downcurve
shape, lockdown
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restrications
will
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ease
down and after that
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people
can plan to
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visit
such
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places
. If
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people
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keep
visiting such kind of
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irrespective of the
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then it may
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to
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diffulties
to each and every individual.

Lastly
, I would like to give my opinion by keeping
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current
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situation
in mind that we should
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stop
visiting tourist
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places
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atleast
for
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some
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help
our country to
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come
out of this
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pandamic
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also
your family and you will be safe. If we follow
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government
headlines
strictly
then as
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soon
as we can go and
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visit
the
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places
.
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IELTS essay Is today's situation is good to visit tourist places. Advantages and disadvantages.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
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