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What does Security mean to me?

What does Security mean to me? 8Leom
It’s almost been two years of my interest in this field and I would love to say, that security for me stands for independence and a huge challenge, I firmly believe that every person working or pursuing security as a carrier feels the same way, security gives me the vision which no other profession would, I believe, that this field gives you opportunity to be in charge of everything and I think it is vital for every individual to feel independent in their everyday life, security challenges me as a person and helps me to strengthen my skills and be the best version of myself.
It’s almost been two years of my interest in this field and I would
love
to say, that
security
for me stands for independence and a huge challenge, I
firmly
believe that every person working or pursuing
security
as a carrier feels the same way,
security
gives me the vision which no other profession would, I believe, that this field gives you opportunity to be in charge of everything and I
think
it is vital for every individual to feel independent in their everyday life,
security
challenges me as a person and
helps
me to strengthen my
skills
and be the best version of myself.
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IELTS essay What does Security mean to me?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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