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MY NAME IS JINUMOL JAYAKUMAR. YOU CAN CALL ME JINU. I AM PROFESSIONALLY A PHARMACIST. CURRENTLY, I AM RESIDING IN THE SULTANATE OF OMAN. I HAVE BEEN LIVING HERE FOR 3 YEARS. I AM WORKING AS A PHARMACIST IN A RETAIL PHARMACY GROUP. I HAVE BEEN WORKING IN THE PHARMACY FOR TWO YEARS. I AM WELL ADAPTED TO THE CULTURE OF OMAN. BEING AN INDIAN CITIZEN I CAN ASSURE YOU THAT I LIKE OMANI CULTURE AND I RESPECT THE PEOPLE OF OMAN. I AM A NATIVE OF A SMALL VILLAGE IN THE SOUTHERN PART OF INDIA, KERALA. I HAD COMPLETED MY STUDIES IN THE FIELD OF PHARMACY, BACHELOR OF PHARMACY FROM ST JOSEPH’S COLLEGE OF PHARMACY. THE FIRST TWO YEARS I HAD WORKED WITH LAKESHORE HOSPITAL AND RESEARCH CENTERS AS A HOSPITAL PHARMACIST FROM THIS PLACE I HAD STARTED MY PROFESSIONAL JOURNEY. I TRIED FOR OMAN FROM LAKESHORE HOSPITAL ATTENDED MORE ONLINE CLASSES I HAD STUDIED VERY HARD TO ACHIEVE MY PROMETRIC SCORE BETTER. FINALLY, I GOT MY SCORE.
MY NAME IS
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JINUMOL
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JAYAKUMAR
. YOU CAN CALL ME
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JINU
. I AM
PROFESSIONALLY
A PHARMACIST.
CURRENTLY
, I AM RESIDING IN THE SULTANATE OF OMAN. I HAVE BEEN LIVING HERE FOR 3 YEARS. I AM WORKING AS A PHARMACIST IN A RETAIL
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PHARMACY
GROUP.
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I
HAVE BEEN WORKING IN THE
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PHARMACY
FOR TWO YEARS.
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I
AM WELL ADAPTED TO THE CULTURE OF OMAN. BEING AN INDIAN CITIZEN I CAN ASSURE YOU THAT I LIKE OMANI CULTURE AND I RESPECT THE
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PEOPLE
OF OMAN. I AM A NATIVE OF A
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SMALL
VILLAGE IN THE SOUTHERN PART OF INDIA, KERALA. I HAD COMPLETED MY STUDIES IN THE FIELD OF
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PHARMACY
, BACHELOR OF
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PHARMACY
FROM ST JOSEPH’S COLLEGE OF
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PHARMACY
. THE
FIRST
TWO YEARS I HAD WORKED WITH
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LAKESHORE
HOSPITAL AND RESEARCH CENTERS AS A HOSPITAL PHARMACIST FROM THIS PLACE I HAD
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STARTED
MY PROFESSIONAL JOURNEY. I TRIED FOR OMAN FROM
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LAKESHORE
HOSPITAL ATTENDED MORE ONLINE CLASSES I HAD STUDIED
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VERY
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HARD
TO ACHIEVE MY
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PROMETRIC
SCORE BETTER.
FINALLY
, I
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GOT
MY SCORE.
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IELTS essay introduce your self and write about your journey

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
169 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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