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WHAT DOES HAPPINESS MEAN TO YOU?

WHAT DOES HAPPINESS MEAN TO YOU? awNP9
WHAT DOES HAPPINESS MEAN TO YOU? The concept of happiness and how we understand it, is something that depends who you are talking about. What is the meaning of happiness for you? Firstly, the meaning of this word is completely different for different people. For example, one person can think happiness is associated with the money you have and other people can prefer enjoy small moments as part of what the happiness mean to them. Finally, happiness is that feeling of enjoyment when you live the hardest times in your life. People in poor countries, who don't have money but they have their families, know that the smallest details give them happiness.
WHAT DOES
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HAPPINESS
MEAN TO YOU?

The concept of
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happiness
and how we understand it, is something that
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depends
who you are talking about. What is the meaning of
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happiness
for you?

Firstly
, the meaning of this word is completely
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different
for
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different
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people
.
For example
, one person can
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think
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happiness
is associated
with the money you have and other
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people
can prefer enjoy
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small
moments as part of what the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
happiness
mean to them.

Finally
,
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happiness
is that feeling of enjoyment when you
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live
the hardest times in your life.
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People
in poor countries, who don't have money
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but
they have their families, know that the smallest
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details
give them
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
happiness
.
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Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS essay WHAT DOES HAPPINESS MEAN TO YOU?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
112 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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